Some people believe that success in sports depends on physical ability. Others believe that there are more important factors. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, a great number of individuals are capable of obtaining a lot of prizes in sport competitions. Therefore, opinions differ as to whether physical ability contributes mostly to the success in sports. Although some experts have a thought that ability relating to the health is the key factor, I would argue that there are some other fundamental contributors to the achievements of sport players.
On the one hand, there are some factors persuading some people to believe that attainment in sports is mostly reliant on physical ability. The first one stems from the magnitude of health conditions in playing sports. For example, an athlete attending Olympic Games needs to be healthy without any serious illnesses like cardiovascular or respiratory deseases if he desires to achieve gold medal. It is impossible for a person to obtain prizes in sport events without a good health condition. Moreover, good physical ability can be an incentive for a sport player to promote his talent to gain high awards. To illustrate, without the contribution of health, , Tien Linh, a very famous striker of Vietnam, cannot dedicate his talent for the development of Vietnamese football.
On the other hand, a chain of reasons have convinced me to support the idea that other factors can assist a person to attain sports success. The first factor may be innate talent. For instance, thanks to the exceptional ability and passion for football, Nguyen Quang Hai, a Vietnamese midfielder, are able to perform vey excellently in many matches. As a result, he have been voted to be one the best football players for many times. Furthermore, being born in wealthy families is also an inevitable and predominant contributor as these families can afford to pay for training courses with the purpose of helping their children to improve their innate sport abilities.
In conclusion, admittedly, good physical condition can be a crucial part of the sport success; however, I want to affirm that some other factors which play such an essential role in the sport attainment of a person need to be taken into account.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12209302326 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84348564758 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1206909389 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.466666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213167125736 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763461180744 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822855170401 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145076111707 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468268892335 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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