Some people believe that success in sports depends on physical ability. Others believe that there are more important factors. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There is an argument that physical health is crucial to success in sports, while others believe that there are more important factors. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my own opinion.
On the one hand, physical ability is usually considered to be the most important factor as playing sports required much strength, having good physical health not only gives people more chances against their opponents but also allows them to pursue their passion in the long term, especially in middle-age. In addition, it could help to avoid being exhausted after practicing and recover from injuries more quickly. Take the example of Ronaldo- a famous football player, He still plays football as a professional player although he is almost 40, this could explain by his physical strength which is better than others at that age.
In spite of playing an important role, physical health is just one of the main factors leading to high achievement in sports. Others might include mental health or financial ability. Statistics have shown that people who succeed in sports often show more control of their emotions, not be distracted, and focus completely on the match also helps sportsmen to observe their opponent more carefully and make suitable decisions in certain situations. Another factor might be financing, not having enough money is one of the main reasons that many sportsmen give up their dreams to become professional players. For instance, people have to pay for their sports equipment, daily activities while staying abroad, and fines during the match.
In my opinion, there are various factors that contribute to a person’s success in sports, and there is no factor that is more crucial than the others whether it is physical ability. it is important for people to improve all things that could help them achieve their goals instead of focusing on only one aspect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 183, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, still, while, for instance, in addition, in fact, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09032258065 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48784767544 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574193548387 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.6244061445 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.5 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313737950411 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11331355552 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865789986231 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222230102641 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114816671398 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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