Nowadays, with increasing tution fees and strong compitition for getting high grades for better education; online learning or teaching children at homes is becoming a new trend. Some people also think, that this is better for their child's developement.
The ideology behind this, is said to be the pressure of assignments and homework is increasing every day and on the top of that comes expectations from parents. In schools, you always need to keep up with class and student can't learn with his/her own phase. We all have different grasping capability. Some may learn quickly from practical knowledge others need more therotical approach. Schools don't provide this individual attention.
On the contrary, schools provide a chance to get socially engaged, to compete and a chance to evaluate ourselves to know where we stand in our society. It is said that, learning at home not only make a child introvert but they might lack communication skills and without them it is hard to represent yourself in the community. Just having a talent is not enough sometimes and we can't be sure about that too. Because child's developement at the home solely depends upon it's parent's or home tutor's ability while at school he can choose the best teacher to to be taught from.
In my opinion, if the government state a strict laws and keep the school fees low while providing the world leavel education, many people will tend towards school education than taking the responsibility in own hands. I think everyone wants to live their own life without worrying about their child's education. As long as government stays responsible enough to give the country the better future though giving cheap and quality education, teaching children at schools will stay as the best solution for child's through.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... need to keep up with class and student cant learn with his/her own phase. We all ha...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... need more therotical approach. Schools dont provide this individual attention. O...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...a talent is not enough sometimes and we cant be sure about that too. Because childs ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...t school he can choose the best teacher to to be taught from. In my opinion, if th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, while, i think, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05067567568 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63357325508 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638513513514 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5375529888 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.785714286 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310459648626 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873116299597 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824394847501 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176875794601 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900069439337 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.