Some people believe that technological tools such as body scanner and CCTV have significantly enhanced our safety and security, while others feel that they have resulted In a loss of privacy.Do the benefits of these items outweigh their disadvantages?
Technology has brought a gigantic revolution in the way of securing approach. Presently, some proportions of people assert that the existence of closed cuircut television has really upgraded safety standard over couple of decades. By contrast, others claim that it snatches privacy of masses. Here, I would like to establish its pros outweigh its cons.
There are manifold points to support shiny side of curtsey camera. First and foremost, nowadays crime is spreading its roots day by day like robbery, theft, pick pockets, chain snatching and so on. Thus, organizing closed cuircut television pla...
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2014-07-25 | Fadlanmuzakki | 80 | view |
| 2014-04-19 | Justin | 85 | view |
- Some people say that computer games are bad for children by all means others believe that these games are contributing to children s development Discuss both views and give your own opinion 72
- In many countries schools have sever problems with student behaviour What do you think What solutions can you suggest 85
- Humans tend to copy one another especially in fashion choice of clothes and consumer goods Do you agree or disagree Provide your view and examples from your own experience 90
- The scientist believes that computers will become more intelligent than human beings Some people find it is a positive while others think it is a negative development Discuss both points and give your own opinion 68
- Some people believe that students should be allowed to evaluate and criticise their teachers to improve the quality of education Others think this is disrespectful to teachers Discuss both views give your opinion and include relevant examples 65
Comments
sir please check my essay now
sir please check my essay now and rate it once again?????
Sentence: Presently, some proportions of people assert that the existence of closed cuircut television has really upgraded safety standard over couple of decades.
Error: cuircut Suggestion: circuit
Sentence: There are manifold points to support shiny side of securty camera.
Error: securty Suggestion: security
Sentence: Thus, organising closed cuircut television plays a phenomenal role to restrain these nasty activities and catch the criminals.
Error: cuircut Suggestion: circuit
Error: organising Suggestion: organizing
Sentence: All of above, security cameras can not be made disloyal while sometime human guards can be made decievers by offering bribe to them.
Error: decievers Suggestion: deceivers
Sentence: To begin with, the introduction of securty camera is responsible to emerge unemploment.
Error: securty Suggestion: security
Error: unemploment Suggestion: unemployment
Sentence: For example, millions of securty guards are being replaced due to modern security tools.
Error: securty Suggestion: security
flaws:
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
This is out of topic:
'To begin with, the introduction of securty camera is responsible to emerge unemploment. For example, millions of securty guards are being replaced due to modern security tools.'
need to talk about 'have resulted In a loss of privacy'
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 320 350
No. of Characters: 1649 1500
No. of Different Words: 207 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.229 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.153 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.745 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 127 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 69 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.842 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.418 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.737 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.264 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.516 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.078 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5