Some people believe that technology has made man more social and others think that it has made him less social. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
People have different views about whether or not technology has caused humans to be more or less social. This essay examines both stance and gives my personal thoughts on the issue.
It is true that technology has caused man to be more social because individuals can now communicate easily with each other, in spite of long distances between them. Gone are the days where a person has to travel from one place to another just to deliver a message or letter. With the advent of smart phone internet gadgets and computers, within seconds, an individual can send messages and recieve emails discussing any issue via smart technology. For example, I am able to have a video link conference in Nigeria with friends in Japan, without having to travel there. Consequently, this has created ease and comfort in my communication and has encouraged my active participation in the social world.
However, despite the easy connection with other people as a result of internet technology, this has made man practice a lot more self- isolation. Many persons now take advantage of technological advances that they rather stay indoors and communicate than come out to socialise with the world. Further more, they argue that it is less stressful and saves time, thus, not realising it creates more time in isolating themselves from the world, which can have detrimental effects on their well being.
In conclusion, although, some might argue that technology has created more self-isolation for man, thus, making man less social. I subscribe to the belief that technology has made humans much more social because of the ease in long distance communication it has created.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, second, so, thus, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in spite of, it is true, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0989010989 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73920187861 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611721611722 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2347078301 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292937623929 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104850709787 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900900543389 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198656911345 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826635236935 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.