Some people believe that teenagers are facing more problems in their life than they did in the past and this is because parents are spending more time at work than at home.
Do you agred or disagree ?
Few individuals thinks youngsters faces majority of complications during their life than they did in past. In addition to this, somehow parents are responsible for this, because they spent most of their time working than spending at home. I think in reverse manner and agree to the givnen statement. My inclination are justified furthur.
Out of all the reasons the strongest one to prove my point is, adolescent finds it hard to pursue their career when they are young and dealing with majority of problems. After finishing their schooling they do not have certain goals. Due to which, they get depressed and have negative impacts on them with uncertain future. Whereas, back in the days the competetion among the young ones were not tough and were able to succeed in their reapective field. Not only be successful, but also get a eminent life ahead to them.
On the other hand, parents are also equally responsible for problems that persist in their children's lives. Moreover, because of their hectic schedule they lack good parenting skills. By this i mean, majority of them go after money leaving their responsibility behind in nurturing their younones. For instance, leaving those responsibility could result in doing drugs and alchohol addiction to children.
However, other counter claim this sentence. They believe that after a certain age, teenager should be able to handle the rough situations. To add to this, parents who are working hard to provide the facilities, adolescents should learn from them, and star being responsible. Thus, teenagers should adapt transition phase and deal with the problems.
To conclude and wrap up the discussion, I would say that parents should spend some quality time with thier children not only spend time, but also should understand the problems they are having in their life. Also, teenager shoud know how to tackel the situation as it will help them in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and dealing with majority of problems. After finishing their schooling they do not h...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...d. Not only be successful, but also get a eminent life ahead to them. On the ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hey lack good parenting skills. By this i mean, majority of them go after money l...
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Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this responsibility' or 'those responsibilities'?
Suggestion: this responsibility; those responsibilities
...g their younones. For instance, leaving those responsibility could result in doing drugs and alchoho...
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Line 9, column 284, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ckel the situation as it will help them in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, whereas, for instance, i mean, i think, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12101910828 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58637943749 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601910828025 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4043636546 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6315789474 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5263157895 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306452262603 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825308572192 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929372946465 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169216658326 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103806182046 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.