Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree ar disagree?
One of the most controversial issue today relates to money. Today people are not controlled by their mind but by money. This topic asserts that hardened earning should be paid as tax to government or not? I completely agree with the topic and will explore the same through various aspects in the following paragraphs.
There are many points to support my opinion, one of them is "Rich verses Poor". Since India is one of the developing countries therefore, above seventy percent of indian population are below poverty line, who cannot afford to pay taxes. Since government impose tax on every item therefore, everyone is forced to pay, whether he is rich or poor. Whereas, when poor people encounter some health problems and seek government hospital for cure, in return they face incidents such as; unavailability of doctors, medicines and unhygenic rooms etcetera. So as a result they look for private hospitals for treatments.
Even in the sector of education as well, poors face many problems, their childrens are not able to enjoy facilities such as lack of teachers, condition of furniture, bad infrastructure, unhygenic midday meal and many more. They pay more money as tax than they earn from their hard work so that government can help them in future but instead of help they are usually neglected. Most of the taxes are used by corrupted officials, who fill their lockers with earnings of poor therefore, it is well said that rich are getting richer and poor are getting poorer.
Thus, it can be ascertained that it is a debatable issue although, i believe that people who earn more than a predefined amount have to pay tax and not for those who earn less than that amount so government should not force any poor people to pay tax.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91275167785 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64361385285 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58389261745 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5750200647 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.615384615 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252232750661 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809721500037 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733135952748 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154273522957 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446096177371 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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