There is arguable debate among peolpe that whether tavelling other nations is significant for getting knowledge about them or using tv and internet is pivotal for knowing about other countries . However , this essay will highlight both views with potential reasons alongwith my personal opinion that tv and internet method is more preferable .
There are certain reasons which show travelling to other nations for enhancing the infromation about their cultures and languages is an effective way as we can get chance to meet with different people and we can observe everything in a practical way . In other words, with the help of travelling other countries , we can see a live show of their cultures and traditions which may help us to get more familarity with them. Another benefit of this trend that can reap by us is that it can introduce chance of trying other foods , clothes and way of living with help of local.
However, although travelling is a major way to get knowledge about other nations , television and internet can also a reasonable source to complete this desires because television telecastes reality shows of other nations which are highly helpful for us to know about other nations people's real life and it is easy affordable for everying to use tv and internet . As regards internet , it is beneficial to live uptodate with the whole world .
In conclusion, while both methods travelling and using tv and internet for getting knowledge of other nations have their own importance and signifucance , internet and tv are more affordable and reasonable for everyone .
- Some people believe that travel to other nations is important to know about them,but other think that internet and tv is more useful for getting knowledge about other nations . Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
- Some people believe that travel to other nations is important to know about them,but other think that internet and tv is more useful for getting knowledge about other nations . Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, while, as regards, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10810810811 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70768762647 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501930501931 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.0311462807 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.375 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.375 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.488554765671 0.244688304435 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.231675815345 0.084324248473 275% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.161692122544 0.0667982634062 242% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.359416146784 0.151304729494 238% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976218620662 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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