Some people believe that travelling within a city is better by car while some other think bicycle is a better means Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is irrefutable to say that traveling by car is much safer and convenient way of transportation. I believe that traveling by cycle provides enormous benefits to the health and it enhance quality of life too. This essay will discuss both the aforementioned view in the subsequent paragraphs.
On the one hand, traveling by car offers safety and reliable journey in the city. Nonetheless, in metropolitan such as Mumbai, Delhi and Ahmedabad it is very hard to drive car on the road due to plenty of traffic. Besides, car protect people from hars sunlight and unstoppable rain fall. In addition to this, we can bring our family with us in car and masses can enjoy journey together. Nevertheless, cars produced great amount of carbon emissions which has hazardous effect of the environment.
According to the research of a university, every year car produced huge amount of carbon in the atmosphere which has negative impact of flora and fauna.
On the other hand, driving bicycle is necessary? Certainly yes. driving a bicycle not only offers health benefits, but also eco-friendly mode of transportation. Thus, it is really crucial for civilisation to ride a bicycle rathan than car. Doctor of numerous countries also suggest that riding a bicycle for 30 minutes enhance cardio vascular system significantly. Government is encouraging to the citizen to drive cycle, and they also built long separate raods for cycle.
To recapitulate, I pen down saying that car provides plethora of benefits in order to drive with safety in the city, however, cycle offers enormous health and environment benefits.
- Nowadays more people are choosing to live with their friends or alone rather than with their families this trend is likely to have a negative impact on community To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people do not go directly to college but travel or work for a short time Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 56
- some people think that newspaper are the best media to learn and get information from while others believe that the internet is a better source discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
- The best way to understand other cultures is to work for a multinational organisation To what extent do you agree or disagree 82
- The difference in age between parents and their children has increased compared to the past Do you think advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'enhances'?
Suggestion: enhances
... enormous benefits to the health and it enhance quality of life too. This essay will di...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 65, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Driving
...ng bicycle is necessary? Certainly yes. driving a bicycle not only offers health benefi...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, really, so, thus, while, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12802768166 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8983654056 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1330796625 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.625 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357579934628 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101008882687 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.226513788626 0.0667982634062 339% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221541756356 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.349848705689 0.056905535591 615% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.