Living with friends or independently offers numerous challenges to people. Masses who live in remote areas have to stay in the metropolitan for study or working intentions. I agree with the given notion that this is a disadvantageous trend for them this. This essay shall discuss the drawbacks of living alone and the benefits of living with the family.
To commence with, in this cutting-edge era countless people go for study far away from their home town and stay with their friends in sharing room. Moreover, students who live in urban areas independently, become extravagant because of no influence of parents or other family members. Meanwhile, they get an addiction to intoxication products namely alcohol and drugs, as their other friends taking these for enjoyment purposes. People who complete their academy won't come back to live with family because of employment and not obtain moral value and respect.
Additionally, people become independent and do not accept their parents to stay with them. Youngsters who live alone feel more isolated and this becomes a serious problem for them. Furthermore, living lonely causes depression and anxiety which have detrimental effects on individuals' health. Sometimes due to mental disease people commit suicide as no one in their life to express their feelings.
However, living alone teach them the value of parents as all household chore they have to do alone without any help. They value more to their parents as they have to feed themselves.
To close the discussion, living alone while studying or job has countless drawbacks for individuals, nonetheless, they also learn respect towards their family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...xiety which have detrimental effects on individuals health. Sometimes due to mental disease...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30188679245 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7420852802 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581132075472 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.465048496 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363371420069 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130579997178 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581849324865 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199847793057 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670072921211 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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