" Some people believe that unpaid community service should a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree "
In recent years, unpaid community services have been more and more concerning by individuals and governments as well. It is agreed that these types of services should be included in high school education such as charity activities, teaching other children and activities for society. From my point of view, sending students to work in community services is good idea , it can provide them with many lots of valuable experiences, reinforce relation between society's members and help government reducing social burden.
Firstly, life skills are really crucial important and by doing voluntary work students can gain how to not only organize activity but also manage their time. Through that, high school students would get out of theoretical knowledge from books at school and approach nearly to reality. Take a research of US minister of education as a strong example, students who joined community services and get life experiences would be attract greatly by employers more than others don't get. If skill to work in a team improved day by day, students would carry out everything what they need to support for their future.
Secondly, by giving students compulsory work activity with charitable or community organization, they would be encouraged to communicate and take care of others. For example, at a high school in vietnam, students allowed to organize a charity program to help disadvantage children, through that activities, teaching them know to love others and get responsibility to society. Besides that, If students have positive activities to do,they will not bored and come up with negative idea which can be dangerous for them and community as well. Because of that, the proportion of crime would reduce significantly and government would also drop a concern.
in conclusion, in my opinion, unpaid community services should be promoted in the early stage of education despite of positive effect.
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- " Some people believe that unpaid community service should a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children).To what extent do you agree or disagree " 84
- it is neither possible nor useful for a country to provide university places for a high proportion of young people.To what extend do you agree or disagree? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'organizing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3125 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8028395783 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.018013633 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.583333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19229843956 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769831782463 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511411343404 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125404608542 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320281290962 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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