Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that high school progammes should include the unpaid community service. I totally agree with this opinion, and I think that unpaid community service shoud be obligatory in high school programmes.
First of all, i believe that joining in unpaid community activities will helps students to increase their social and relationship skills. In other words, volunteering give them the opportonity to develop and practice their social skills, as they are meeting regularly with a group of people with common interests. Once they have momentum, it is easier to make friends and contacts. For example, when high school students take part in an unpaid community service like working for a charity, they will have chance to express their thoughts and find someone who has same opionion that can make friend with them. That’s why it is compulsory to add unpaid community activity into studing programmes that helps students to improve their social and relationship skills.
Secondly, doing volunteer is good for their mind. On the negative side, by doing voluntary work, high school students can be provided a healthy boost to their self-confidence and life satisfaction. For instance, they will feel encouraged and proud of themselves if they are doing good things for the other and community. For this reason, advantages of volunteering that keeps them improve their mental health very good.
To conclude, unpaid community service shoud be obligatory in high school programmes that will helps students to improve their social skills and develop their mental health easier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i think, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65035544786 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6378339247 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.833333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283396669804 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116262110051 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621521651381 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191827389805 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305197216161 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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