Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes(for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that unpaid community service needs to be conducted as a compulsory part of high school programmes. In my opinion, it is a good approach to involve the students in such activities, for a better growth of communication and interpersonal skills.
Interpersonal and communication skills are significant assets for the students to adapt in the growing and competitive employment market, as the students will be working in a communicative and interactive environment during the voluntary work period. By the involvement in unpaid community services, students will also develop a sense of sympathy towards needy communities and get a willingness to help others.
Nowadays, teenagers spend most of their spare time either on the internet, social media platforms or some inappropriate activities. So, organizing unpaid community services in schools will motivate them to utilize their time effectively. For instance, my school solely focused on academic aspects without prioritizing other outdoor tasks. Thus, we could not explore our interests and we lacked vital skills that would have led us to better present and future. In addition, unpaid voluntary works create an awareness towards the students about the effort required for earning money, which will result in monetary respect and discipline in spending money more practically.
To sum up, unpaid community services is a necessary school activity to promote students' knowledge about the external scenario and make them realize the satisfaction of helping people selflessly.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62393162393 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08396629784 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645299145299 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6239435578 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.6 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219886913389 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907824655509 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801765743132 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142108809031 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540468549186 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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