Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes(for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It has suggested that voluntary work should a compulsory in the high school curriculum. Although I feel, students must work without gain for the society, that an idea is beneficial for the pupils.
On the first hand, students who study in high school, they should do anything for the community without getting money. Because it is helpful to learn new skills and experience at an early age, it can useful in the future when they will go for work. As a result, they aware of the working environment and how to deal in some situations with an organization. However, students mostly have been spent their time on worthless activities such as watching TV, they could not get knowledge with it just waste their valuable time. Thus, as a necessary subject, they should work for people in society.
Moreover, if it is a compulsory subject by the study of high school, so they should be working for other people. Subsequently, they would easily learn with practical experience and different skills. Furthermore, the crime rate would be decreased because students have the ability to do work and they never think about dangerous criminal activities. Hence, they would be a flawless person and it is not only beneficial for students but also for themselves as well.
To conclude, it is believed by some that without wages work for the community should do by high school students as a study part. In my opinion, it will an essential to students and society to become a better person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 530, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...with it just waste their valuable time. Thus as a necessary subject, they should wor...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, i feel, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87109375 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6698840124 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546875 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2008627167 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.9230769231 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269744343423 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121897642404 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977424298137 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199631674274 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286488615846 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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