Some People Believe That Violence On Television and In Computer Games Has A Damaging Effect On Society. Others Deny That These Factors Have Any Significant Influence On People's Behavior.
Dicuss Both Views and Give Your Opinion.
While some think that violent content displayed in computer games and on television is psychologically damaging to society, others posit that such effect on humans’ behavior is not significant. Although the impact is evident, exposure to violence in this way is not the main factor behind aggressive behavior.
The former’s point of view about the influence of violent scenes on people often predicate their argument on the fact that viewing too much aggressive acts can make children become desensitized to brutality and cruelty. This means they might become indifferent to others’ sufferings at least, or event opt for violence as a way to resolve disagreements. More importantly, a shortage of empathy has been identified as one of factors contributing to criminal activities and therefore, were there no method to regulate violently explicit images in movies and video games, there would be an increase in crime rates, especially among children.
Nevertheless, such damaging effect of violent images on society is not that dramatic because generally people are able to distinguish between real-life and fantasy situations. This ability is widely common among today’s individuals as most of they can have access to education where logical thinking and common sense are inculcated through out the curriculum. Hence, despite the abundance of violent content and the ease of access to it, there is no conclusive evidence to support the claim that exposure to violence can increase aggression. In fact, violent behavior is caused by a multitude of factors, such domestic violence or anxiety, and that exposure to violent content is just one of many possible contributors. And to specify the causes of hostile behavior in each person, it is imperative to conduct a personal investigation.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that brutal actions featuring in films and games might possibly contribute to the devleopment of anti-social behaviors, such content is not as significant as people think due to our ability to reason as well as the presence of other important factors which vary from person to another.
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| 2021-11-24 | SUSANNA PETROSYAN | 78 | view |
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Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
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Message: Use simply 'might', 'possibly'.
Suggestion: might; possibly
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Message: Use simply 'might'.
Suggestion: might
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, at least, in conclusion, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38138138138 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98477349841 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588588588589 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.8402596155 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.909090909 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2727272727 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2144913986 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753623548903 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580135168375 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133042667802 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053393625895 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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