Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people are of the opinion that tourists from various cultural background supposed to embrace host nation's traditions. On the strike contrary, others harshly critique the former view as they agree that travelers' diverse cultures ought to be highly welcomed by host countries. I would support the latter point of view since I strongly feel that knowing and respecting tourists' culture is totally advantageous for both travelers and host countries.
First, let me put a light on the ideology of the importance of getting familiar and following the host country's customs as a traveler which is widely believed by a number of people. It is worthy to consider this vital point that if tourists show willingness about the host country's beliefs and traditions, they will undoubtedly gain some invaluable experiences as well as information about that country. Additionally acceptance of diverse cultures gives human the feeling of tolerance. More over these feeling of acceptance of various behaviors provide people an opportunity to expand their communication areas by contacting various people from various nations. Hence I think these sociable and tolerant tourists have advantage of making friends in every country over the tourist who usually show disapproval through this topic.
Now, I will hurtle towards the latter view, which is welcoming travelers' tradition is a must-do for host countries.it is undeniably apparent that if tourist come to conclusion that their beliefs are not going to be embraced by a country that they want pay it a visit, they of course are not interested to go to that country. Hence, the tourist industry of that country would gradually lose its reputation. To put it more simply the more feeling of staying in their own home can be offered to tourist, the more group of them will be attracted to that country. Taken for instance some unreasonable laws that usually impose by Islamic countries on foreign travelers to make them to wear hijab as they know it as a virtue of their country. This action can be bright example of make others to do what you believe even they are not usually agree to do that. Therefore, I hold this belief that all nations' customs are respectful and we as a cultured people acquired to respect them.
By way of conclusion, while people have divergent perspectives on this debate, I believe we as a united world regardless our diverse nationalities do not have the right to underestimate any beliefs or cultures since they are all imperative for every country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, i think, of course, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2113.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07932692308 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77702291631 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514423076923 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 661.5 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.4430051238 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.866666667 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7333333333 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218042164609 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774801098983 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351857559141 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132952708105 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550540098443 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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