Some people believe that the world is much less safe today than it used to be. there are still many wars being fought, and high tech weapons are sold openly to any country that wants to buy them. in cities, violent crime is increasing every year. it is not a very safe world in which to bring up children. do you agree or disagree?give reasons for your answer.
It is true that today world is unsafe due to the cutting edge weapons which are used in war. I totally agree with this statement new born babies are not secure in this world at the moment owing to this issue. This essay will high light that certainly this is a rational approach that needs to be opted.
To begin with, most of the countries are selling nuclear weapons to others like UAE, KSA so on. Making money is the main purpose around the globe. If the world is facing danger , no one bother about the situation. Another reason of the dealing with weapon is that show up the power or sustainability of the world form different countries. For example, a recent survey done by 'UK news' in the UK, around 40 millions weapons are sold by USA to UAE. Hence, it is clear that if any new babies are coming in this world definitely going to face insecurity.
Elaborating my viewpoints more, increasing violent due to a large number of modern weapons are using in different cities. Categorically discussing, it can not be ignored that preserving huge number of weapons are very harmful for the world. Thus, children would fell safe, if we take some steps to stop selling all kinds of arms.
In conclusion, according to argument aforementioned above one can reach to a conclusion that if we want to be safe our children and world, need to take some measures to stop buy and sell weapons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59036144578 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49674668319 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626506024096 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0567022271 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9230769231 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215843632772 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677049926763 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445942217052 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124265686336 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235245797685 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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