Some people believe that the world is much less safe today than it used to be. There are still many wars being fought and high tech weapons are sold openly to any country that wants to buy them. In cities, violent crime is increasing every year.
It is not a very safe world in which to bring up children.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for you answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
It is true that today world is unsafe due to the cutting edge weapons which are used in war. I totally agree with this statement new born babies are not secure in this world at the moment owing to this issue. This essay will high light that certainly this is a rational approach that needs to be opted.
To begin with, many countries are selling nuclear weapons to others like UAE, KSA so on. Making money is the main purpose around the globe. If the world is facing danger, no one bother about situation. Another reason of the dealing with weapon is that show up the power or sustainability of the world form different countries. For example, a recent survey done by 'UK news' in the UK, around 40 millions weapons are sold by USA to UAE. Hence, it is clear that if any new babies are coming in this world definitely going to face insecurity.
Elaborating my viewpoints more, a large number of modern weapons are using in different cities. Due to the fact that violent will be increased day by day. Categorically discussing, it can not be ignored that preserving huge number of weapons are very harmful for the world. Thus, children would fell safe, if we take some steps to stop selling all kinds of arms.
To conclude, it is affirmed that modern world is more prone to crime and criminals. This place is not suitable to live on for our young generations as they will not learn anything valuable here. It becomes our moral responsibility to make this land a place worth living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ity. Elaborating my viewpoints more, a large number of modern weapons are using in different c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, thus, for example, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56928838951 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42844547331 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629213483146 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.1430211595 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.25 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189501904059 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568287264411 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429670541712 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102567813413 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487357883506 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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