These days, people often immigrate to different locations. The reason behind this could be a well-paying job offer or a scholarship in a leading university. This makes it crucial that every individual learn a second language. A lot of people think that the most helpful way to learn a new language is by visiting the country and conversing with native speakers. I completely agree with the above statement.
Supporters of this argument may say that having an environment where the language will be excessively used will provide the right platform to implement what you have learned. Therefore, your mistakes will be easily corrected and you'll be able to learn the language effortlessly.
Learning a new language isn't always about mastering the grammar of the language rules. It's about the usage of the words. To be able to understand the usage and pronunciation, it is a must to interact with native speakers.
On the other hand, this option may not always be available for most people as they will not necessarily be able to move to another country just to learn the language. It will be a question of priorities then. If the language is really important, it is best to go live in the country where it is spoken.
Given these points, I believe visiting a country and conversing with native speakers is a better way to learn the language, as you can understand the correct usage and pronunciation of the words.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ough unpaid work will both benefit them as well as their community. However, Im not with t...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...em as well as their community. However, Im not with the idea of making this volunt...
^^
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they'll
...hemselves and their community. Firstly, theyll be learning new skills by working as a ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...for the better. On the other hand, I dont entirely believe that unpaid works must...
^^^^
Line 7, column 68, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...rs engaging in unpaid works can benefit a large number of people including themselves. However, s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09266409266 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74209570634 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586872586873 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.0902283166 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.5882352941 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2352941176 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125409672195 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423494574266 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294993638343 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878941506507 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206349795624 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.