Some people belive that the advent of economical air travel has been very benefitial by making international travel more accessible,while other argue that it has a very negative impact. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Traveling by air becomes more popular nowadays because of facilities which are more comfortable and faster. However,when economical air travel come into sight people divided into two,one side is against,but second in favour of and think that it has many benefits. There are some benefits of that statement,but there are also some drawbacks associated with this controversial topic.
On one hand,owing to migration overpopulation can lead to unsafe situations. It is not a secret that overpopulation is one of the global problem now and many people regard it as effect of many types of pollution. The more people live in country the more they harm environment. If everything continue to happen in the same way,in nearest future our planet will be at serious risk.
On the other hand,there are many positive sides of this statement. For instance,it is really good when there is no borders,which staying the contact and processes of import and export between countries. It will influence to socio-economic condition,development in tourism sphere and infrastructure of the country. The budget of government will increase,accordingly there will be less problem with unemployment. Apart from that,it will have an impact on international relationship, not only among population,but also between governmental representatives and because of that there is a strong possibility that we will not have political conflicts.
To conclude,there are majority facts and consideration of that point of issue.I am of opinion that economical air traveling can lead to development country more than any negative sides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, really, second, so, apart from, for instance, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5162601626 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.53116115198 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613821138211 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8174093953 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.384615385 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158399171524 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510373267484 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525316923722 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101855431587 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584025465529 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.