Some people belive that the advent of economical air travel has been very benefitial by making international travel more accessible,while other argue that it has a very negative impact. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...comforts and less spending time. However,when economical air travel come into sight p...
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... people and their views divided into two,one side is against,but second in favour of...
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...ews divided into two,one side is against,but second in favour of and think that it h...
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...is essay we will review both of them. On one hand,traveling to different count...
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...ll review both of them. On one hand,traveling to different countries can have an impa...
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...thing continue to happen in the same way,in forseable future our planet will be at ...
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...be at serious risk. On the other hand,there are many positive sides of this stateme...
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...ve sides of this statement. For instance,it is really good when there is no borders...
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...nt. For instance,it is really good when there is no borders between some countries and people can e...
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... move from one place to another. However,it will have an impact on international re...
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...population,but also between governmental representatives and because of that ther...
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...e will not have political conflicts. To conclude,Im of opinion that there are...
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...e political conflicts. To conclude,Im of opinion that there are more benefits...
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... political conflicts. To conclude,Im of opinion that there are more benefits...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, second, so, for instance, in the same way, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22077922078 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1267340722 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9520719487 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7692307692 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195431164058 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683104555156 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489328139712 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123939117355 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519206642722 0.056905535591 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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