some people belive that childre should study all subjects at school, while others think they should only study subjects they are good at or find interesting
Some people think that students should be learned all subjects at school or only the ones they find useful and fascinating. While others belive that students should only study what they like or they are good at. In my opinion, students should be learned what course they are good at , because this can help to score good masks in exams and unleash their abilities.
On the one hand, students can find what they like throught course of study. So when they learn all subjects, will have the oppotunity to find the subject they are good at. Learning all subjects at school also helps children develop in all aspects. They easy to recognize your strengths and easier career and college options. However they will be stress because they must have good grades in all subjects. For example, some doctors feel they want to study medicine when they are high school. If they do not study in high school, they will not want to do doctor.
On the other hand, children are different and this difference can play a key in development. And if they study what they like, they will feel interested, try ti study well. A specific course can have to achiieve excellence in a particular field of study as students have to go through only the course they like. In addition, this way of teaching may help children to become more focused and determined in their life. For example, the doctor who just study maths, biology, when they studied at school, they did not need to studied history or geography will be more successful in their job campared to the ones who studided all subjects
In conclusion, I can understand why people encourange children to study all subjects, but I think they should be to choose what they want to study and they like.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 283, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... be learned what course they are good at , because this can help to score good mas...
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Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... and easier career and college options. However they will be stress because they must h...
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Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to achiieve excellence in a particular field of study as students have to go th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68524590164 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31877196047 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468852459016 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.4761478143 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.540580935135 0.244688304435 221% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.216601704366 0.084324248473 257% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154814415438 0.0667982634062 232% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.392486441329 0.151304729494 259% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0998712518874 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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