Some people belive that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
To have the job is not a big deal but to sustain that peak is remarkable. According to the local belief, some people think that it is the best approach to continue the job, even the employees are not satisfied with their work or due to less salary. While some people argue that there should be a practical approach towards the job and one have to find their way to over come this situation.
In todays modern world one has to wonder in terms of seeking for his/ her jobs and especially for the freshers who are new at their field, they have to face lots of challenges. It is been observed that some youths are facing many difficulties in terms of their respective field due to the dissatisfaction related to their work and also they cannot change the field as there is very less opportunity in the market, and also people are worried about their future if they might leave their job, because of this reason workers are accustom for this work. Even though people are making themself feel batter toreceives less annual income and they are satisfied.
On the other hand, there are certain situations in which one can definitely improved these circumstances with one's hard work and will definitely achive it. One can over come through this situation by uploading their biodata in online website. For instance, Linkden is the best platform to apply our own choice of job in which we can also negotiate the salary. Moreover, people have their right to raise their hands to improve the situation.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that both views are important for people, but according to my opinion, people should spend more effort to overcome the bad situations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'accustomed'.
Suggestion: accustomed
...job, because of this reason workers are accustom for this work. Even though people are m...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s annual income and they are satisfied. On the other hand, there are certain sit...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'improve'
Suggestion: improve
... situations in which one can definitely improved these circumstances with ones hard work...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... In conclusion, I strongly believe that both views are important for people, but...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75517241379 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45598833788 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565517241379 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.5693989936 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.363636364 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151239201364 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628519156282 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315585993693 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100959845363 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363878871171 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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