No matter who we are, we have to face and deal with unexpected cases in our daily lives, such as cannot cover our expenses due to our low budget or finding that our current occupations do not fulfill our satisfaction. From my point of view, people should analyze their bad situations before making any decisions to solve them, either just going with the flow or figuring out how to change their conditions.
On one hand, satisfying what happens can be considered as an optimal solution since a number of individuals believe that we ought to appreciate what life brings to us. The reason for this argument is that change is really risky and requires great effort. By accepting unfavorable situations, at least people may have a better sense of security, thus, increases their level of happiness to some extent. For instance, job-shifting may not be the best choice to tackle the problem of the unsatisfactory job of a person, because no one and nothing can assure that the new position can meet this labor’s expectations better.
On the other hand, in some cases, I suppose that people should do their best to move up in life. It is undeniable that the advancement of human civilization is built up by those who believe that there are always ways to make things better. Without this spirit, numerous mighty inventions, such as light bulbs, electricity and computers could have never come to life. Plenty of scientists, entrepreneurs and athletics all over the world have gained admirable achievements thanks to their never give up mindset and continued effort. Additionally, trying to improve unhappy situations can help people to discover their potential and make their lives more meaningful.
In conclusion, the way for which we opt to solve our unexpected cases should depend on each situation’s features. While acceptance is sometimes the most reasonable approach, striving to change situations can bring about impressive success and fulfill our expectations better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, really, so, thus, while, at least, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, such as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12037037037 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8342863321 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623456790123 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6960344106 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.615384615 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183733754664 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598762067238 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387232445487 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101560564566 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210519410313 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.