Some people want their country to host international sports event. While others belive that it brings more problems than benefits. Discuss and give your opnion.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Few massaa demand that their nations organised international sports e...
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...t it brings more dilemma than benefits. Whereas, i ill discuss both views in following ...
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...wing pharagraphs. To embark with, there are many foldspoints to sore up views. ...
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...embark with, there are many foldspoints to sore up views. First anf foremost, sp...
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... views. First anf foremost, sports event fetch earnings from the games with the h...
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... that country where that games held and than they purchase many thing than economy a...
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... that games held and than they purchase many thing than economy automatically increase .Mo...
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...hing than economy automatically increase .Moreover, sports events play vital role ...
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...ng than economy automatically increase .Moreover, sports events play vital role to stro...
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....Moreover, sports events play vital role to strong bonding to other countries.wh...
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...vents play vital role to strong bonding to other countries.when players will com...
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...ony strong each other On the other hand,it is universally acknowledge that every ...
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...er On the other hand,it is universally acknowledge that every garden has two weeds This i...
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... hand,it is universally acknowledge that every garden has two weeds This is becau...
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...cause when players perform in event than many times it happen they face many prob...
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...rs perform in event than many times it happen they face many problems related to thei...
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...ce many problems related to their health to tackle that problems country should ...
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... to tackle that problems country should provide facilities and medical service t...
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... medical service to check curb problems.Apart from that ,thr sports persons those are...
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...e to check curb problems.Apart from that ,thr sports persons those are perform in ...
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...from that ,thr sports persons those are perform in that country they may face difficul...
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...ersons those are perform in that country they may face difficulties related to tr...
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...ated to traffic congestion and pollution beacausr facilities should be provide to...
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...ollution beacausr facilities should be provide to fulfill their luxiourious lifestyle ...
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...e to fulfill their luxiourious lifestyle they may face traffic on rode and have ...
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...ourious lifestyle they may face traffic on rode and have difficulties to indulge...
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...s type problems can not deny. To sum up , undoubtedly, sports event have their ow...
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...event have their own have prose anf cons .Thus,as far my concern sports events sho...
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...ent have their own have prose anf cons .Thus,as far my concern sports events should ...
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...have their own have prose anf cons .Thus,as far my concern sports events should be ...
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...sports events should be held because it impact of relationship it helps us to create ...
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...e held because it impact of relationship it helps us to create harmony wirh other...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, whereas, apart from, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.329218107 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6031882288 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 370.936390174 49.4020404114 751% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 215.833333333 106.682146367 202% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.5 20.7667163134 195% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.6666666667 7.06120827912 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285347487529 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125859460472 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868275210599 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175497045502 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050221279788 0.056905535591 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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