Some people want their country to host international sports event. While others belive that it brings more problems than benefits. Discuss and give your opnion.
Few massaa demand that their nations organised international sports events. However, other asserts that it brings more dilemma than benefits. Whereas, i ill discuss both views in following pharagraphs.
To embark with, there are many foldspoints to sore up views. First anf foremost, sports event fetch earnings from the games with the help of country can increase their economy because when other country persons come in that country where that games held and than they purchase many thing than economy automatically increase .Moreover, sports events play vital role to strong bonding to other countries.when players will come for playing than country will welcome and harmony strong each other
On the other hand,it is universally acknowledge that every garden has two weeds This is because when players perform in event than many times it happen they face many problems related to their health to tackle that problems country should provide facilities and medical service to check curb problems.Apart from that ,thr sports persons those are perform in that country they may face difficulties related to traffic congestion and pollution beacausr facilities should be provide to fulfill their luxiourious lifestyle they may face traffic on rode and have difficulties to indulge other environment so this type problems can not deny.
To sum up , undoubtedly, sports event have their own have prose anf cons .Thus,as far my concern sports events should be held because it impact of relationship it helps us to create harmony wirh other.
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... that country where that games held and than they purchase many thing than economy a...
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...hing than economy automatically increase .Moreover, sports events play vital role ...
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...ng than economy automatically increase .Moreover, sports events play vital role to stro...
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...vents play vital role to strong bonding to other countries.when players will com...
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...ony strong each other On the other hand,it is universally acknowledge that every ...
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...er On the other hand,it is universally acknowledge that every garden has two weeds This i...
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...cause when players perform in event than many times it happen they face many prob...
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...rs perform in event than many times it happen they face many problems related to thei...
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...ce many problems related to their health to tackle that problems country should ...
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...ersons those are perform in that country they may face difficulties related to tr...
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...ated to traffic congestion and pollution beacausr facilities should be provide to...
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...ollution beacausr facilities should be provide to fulfill their luxiourious lifestyle ...
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...e to fulfill their luxiourious lifestyle they may face traffic on rode and have ...
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...ourious lifestyle they may face traffic on rode and have difficulties to indulge...
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...s type problems can not deny. To sum up , undoubtedly, sports event have their ow...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, whereas, apart from, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.329218107 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6031882288 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 370.936390174 49.4020404114 751% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 215.833333333 106.682146367 202% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.5 20.7667163134 195% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.6666666667 7.06120827912 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285347487529 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125859460472 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868275210599 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175497045502 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050221279788 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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