Some people choose to eat no meat or fish.They belive that this is not only for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole
Nowadays people have many preferences of food, no mater is it meat, fish, or vegetables. But, A person who finds vegetarianism did not eat food which contain animal products like meat, poultry, and fish, argues that only eating vegetables is enough to take care health.
Some people argue that meat, poultry, fish and some kind of food which is contained animal protein able to trigger high blood pressure, cholesterol, and over fat. They believe being a vegetarian is good way to solve many health problem caused animal protein. Furthermore, vegetable person considered what kind of oil that they use for cooking, they did not compare animal product with vegetables.
This views believe that being vegetarian can give benefits to the world, be a vegetarian means protecting the earth. Guard the world from potential extinction animal, and reduce exploitation animal including fish. On the other hand, others people that are not a vegetarian eat meat and fish every day. It means be a vegetarian is not can be guaranty for others people not exploit animal, because majority people are not vegetarian and they certainly need to eat meat and fish every day, they need to sufficient intake of daily protein. Furthermore, human need to consume animal protein and also fibrous food, it means just eat vegetable is not a good choice. How can people complete daily nutrition with only eat vegetables, humans need many kind of nutrition for being healthy, and human also need enough energy for daily activity. Our body produce energy from food that we consume every day, minus one of body needs can make human be sluggish to do some daily activities.
In my views, be a vegetarian is not a smart choice. Because human need to complete daily nutrition, it means we should eat enough vegetable and also animal product.
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| 2021-12-14 | Adam Diedo | 61 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, kind of, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98679867987 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5195766529 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491749174917 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5371568399 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.928571429 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265430423333 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995878933324 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528823674217 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161345640004 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656055716774 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.