Some people think that the best way to gather information is through newspapers while others believe in other better ways. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays we have many source of information, such as internet, radio, magazine, tabloid, catalogue, and newspapers. Some people argue that the best way to give information is by reading newspapers, even though others consider to recive different ways.
People which has studies background filtered information properly, they usually will be observe the source of information. They only will to read information from newspapers, magazine, or tabloid. The validation of message is being essential. However others argue that they can gather information in ither better ways, for example giving information from their friend or social media.
Public in this era was often to face false information, this situation make people be more collective to trust when they get any massage from other. When hoax is secatered people have to separate the false information and the truth information. Altouhg in modern era we can give the actual fact and real information in media like TV, Radio, and Newspapers, sometime they also send the wrong information to the public. And this mistake is reasonable, because reporter or journalist is also a human that able to make any mistake.
Philosopher and also as Researchers, Rocky Gerung form University of Indonesia said. “ Rise your iq, and hoax will be decries”. This statement demand people in this era being more sensitive with information that they get. No mater the information from newspapers or other source, people are still have to be selective and always checking the new news which come.
In conclusion I should say that information is tense to be wrong, however the information from newspapers or other source, consequently people have to be selective and always checking the news that they accept.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun source seems to be countable; consider using: 'many sources'.
Suggestion: many sources
Nowadays we have many source of information, such as internet, radio...
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Line 2, column 243, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...lidation of message is being essential. However others argue that they can gather infor...
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Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: ACTUAL_EXPERIENCE[1]
Message: Use simply 'fact'.
Suggestion: fact
.... Altouhg in modern era we can give the actual fact and real information in media like TV, ...
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Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...newspapers or other source, consequently people have to be selective and always c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, so, still, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28315412186 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83597946256 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551971326165 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6722133882 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212677241774 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746093951278 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779963750068 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135239637353 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351879787692 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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