Some people choose to have their first child at an older age. What are the reasons? Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?
There is a growing population in our society who have intention of delaying to have kids until later of life. This phenomenon can be derived from a variety of underlying reasons, but from my viewpoint, the merits of the situation certainly eclipses drawbacks that it brings.
There are two main factors leading to the decision of childbirth hesitation. Firstly, versality, creativity and independency are the salient characteristics of nowadays young generation, which encourage them to pursue their passions or dream jobs. The propensity for prioritizing their careers over taking parental roles can be seen in both genders. Especially, in developed countries such as Japan, men and women will not commence a marriage without adequate economic potential and maturity because of their demand for stabilization that has become so scarce these days. Secondly, modern individuals have adopted the fear of taking unwanted custody due to the recent alarming rate of divorce. The problem can be traced to the increasing number of premature married couples, who usually encounter the doubt of marital harmony, deterring the desire for raising a child. There would be, consequently, fewer kids growing up without fatherhood or motherhood.
However, the benefits of the phenomenon should not be inflated. That too many couples following such trend might exert adverse effects on the population structure, in particular, future workforce will be reduced and social developing process will be hindered in the long term. Additionally, the infertility that mothers usually meet in their old age can be derived from the delay of childbirth, which heightens the possibility of new child born with mental or physical disabilities. Down syndrome could be a noticeable example of disease that born child can get from childbirth hesitated mother.
In conclusion, the occupational prioritization and the hesitation over the likelihood of single-parent responsibility could be seen as the root of late childbirth, and I am convinced that the benefits are of more significance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52050473186 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09730347523 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640378548896 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9215117143 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0696280728806 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0239196048452 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0254923908479 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0378983882198 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022432623585 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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