Some people claim that the government should provide free healthcare. Other think that the government will not provide the most innovative methods of treatment and its better to invest those fund in education and culture.
What is your opinion?
Improving healthcare is one of the most important concern these days and with time it is being more expensive. Some people believe that government should provide free healthcare for their citizen while others think that instead of funding in free medical, the government should allocated that amount on education and culture. I partially agree with above statement that government should take responsibility for people healthcare.
To begin with, there are several reasons why government should provide the free medical facility to their people. Firstly, medical facility is a basic necessity provided by many developed nation and it should be provided by every country, as people are paying tax every year. For example, in this current situation of pandemic by corona virus, many people have lost their source of income. If they infected by this virus, then how will they get a proper treatment without money, who shall be responsible for any loss?Secondly, healthcare expenses are inflating day by day while income levels of individuals are not increasing proportionately. In case of any medical emergency, people who are going through financial crisis will suffer the most.
However, medical healthcare is an important aspect but the government should not neglect the education system and culture activities as well. The government should come up with the proper plan to balance the amount and spend the money to all of these aspects equally. As education is also important so that people should aware about their health and take extra care of any medical situation. Moreover, cultural activities is also had their own benefits because people should know about the history, as world is going forward with the modern technology, it is important to know where we come from and what our ancestors did to live.
In conclusion, although medical facility is an important aspect to take care by the government but education and culture have their own benefits. So that government should plan accordingly and give importance to all aspect equally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26498422713 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7109118722 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536277602524 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3547304577 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.214285714 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307149833431 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110544720135 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959627169802 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196954532315 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084510304592 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.