Some people claim that not enough of thewaste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recyclingis for governments to make it a legal requirement
To what extent do you think laws are needed tomake people recycle more of their waste?
In modern society, many people tend toavoid recycling home wastes. As a result, some people argue that the only solution is the governments to introduce a legal recycling Act. for homes. In my opinion, I strongly believe that the law is now necessary to tackle this issue.
Many people today, living in a busy schedule, they think recycling is such a waste of time.
To make people aware of environmental problems from home wastes, the government should make a strict law. Forinstance, limit the number of wastes in each home and set the trash out date to once a week, in this case, the volume of the wastes will be decreased, fewer wastes will make recycling easier. Thus, people will do more recycling than before.
However, even with the laws above, some may not follow, so the government should establish fines if they do not follow the regulation. Take more fine from the rich to buy more recycling machines. With this method, people will be more careful about recycling laws. They would not want to pay for fine, so it will make them do it, even though they feel lazy or think it is wasting of time.
To sum up, indeed, the issue of recycling from homes become quite serious these days. Today people often experience climate changes and the death of animals, global warming caused by the wastes, therefore, I think we need the law to make more people to recycle, and to save our environment.
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Suggestion:
...o recycle, and to save our environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, i think, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72874493927 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3830098456 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587044534413 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1143176555 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8461538462 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397246461757 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137784029705 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566990500619 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220093372649 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258355140758 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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