Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In modern times, the issue of sharing confidencial information in public freely has become highly controversial. There are those who believe that scientific research, business and the academic should be shared as much as possible, however, others think that it should not. This essay will examine the both sides of phenomenon and provide my overall opinion.
It is true that people have rights to know and if there are finding from scientific research, business and the academic, it should be officially announced. For example, if there are places other than earth, and found living being other than human being, it should be shared, not to keep it as confidencial. Citizens need to be prepared for the future to not to be panic when they find out the truth, so that the government continuosely do their job without caos. The government would even get support from citizens.
Despite this argument, others find that sharing an important information freely in public could be dangerous as it can be easily misused. For instance, if a major company created significant chamical that could kill hundred of people, and if the organization posted it how to make it on official websites, the information might used by terrorists, so many can die from it. Or there can be a business theif that stole this process and sell it to other competive corporation, then no one would have will to create other creations.
To sum up, sharing an infortant information can be tricky, however, with the reasons above, my opinion is that people have the rights to know what is going on with taxes I pay, and to trust the government work, the information should be shared freely in public.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...ed significant chamical that could kill hundred of people, and if the organization post...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, for example, for instance, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94699646643 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69218994984 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565371024735 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.4917897933 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.272727273 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253599090984 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096818128319 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743669444351 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163903528007 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05369480903 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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