Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste

The burning issue of this modern world is incresing polution from the household waste. According to a group of thinkers not as much as such a trash is recycled and to achieve a appropriate result, some compulsion is required in society from the center.
If pondered, I think this could make a significant changes and improvement is noticed in term of recycling. My inclination will justified in the ensuing paragraphs.
Out of all the reasons behind imposing some mandatory regulation, the principle one is that one have always fear to obeying legislation law. Nowadays all individuals not only wisely aware about the procedure of recycling but also have technology to do it. Nonetheless, why they all are unconscious is that, they do not have any personal disadvantages. If some stringint panelty laid from this kind of people and cut-off some corporal benefits from the center than and than they take it serious to recycle unneccesory things instead of throwing it to the dustbin. Moreover, mutual competition between the citizen is another conflict. By this i mean that all the people think that someone is already doing it; either government or some organisation, and always afraid to involve themself and consider others as responsible person for recycling.
Moreover, indeed this laws would fruitful for the environment. Firstly, it will decrease several harmful effect on flora and fauna to a certain extent. For example, by developing recycling plants of particular types of plastics in India, mortality rate of domastic aminals were (who eat plastic from the street) decreased.
However, I would not overlook the other significant ways. The foremost one is that municipalities should make a seperate arrangement for collecting recyclable waste and then after create a guidlines in which it is compulsion for all to take distinct dustbin for such type of garbage.
To conclude, my explaination prove that, however making some facilities,the need of legal policies will needed to change the mindset of vulnerable population.

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, nonetheless, so, then, for example, i mean, i think, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26153846154 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96008955566 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618461538462 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.769580362 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.875 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308353204371 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746426883171 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554441283562 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125319618762 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447322434422 0.056905535591 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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