Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is sometimes argued whether the powerful computer science and internet could replace public museums and art galleries. I believe new technologies could only work as supplements as appose to replacements.
I believe people who would like to appreciate historical objects and art works online usually find it is convenient to do so. Firstly, one can search for an object by just typing a few characters, and the result would come out automatically. Secondly, unlike museums and art galleries whose opening hours are fixed, people can access the information online at anytime they want. Thirdly, w...
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Sentence: I believe new technologies could only work as supplements as appose to replacements.
Description: A conjunction, subordinating is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to as and appose
Sentence: In conclusion, my view is that new computer technologies are not substitutive for public museum and art galleries.
Error: substitutive Suggestion: No alternate word
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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