Cost involvement has been spreading rapidly in consumers mind to buy a new product or get a service . However, in his essay strongly disagree with the statement because, price is a kind of marketing wile in many brands, and quality and quantity makes the the value of service in surge.
Firstly, It is often happened by lack of knowledge and illiteracy of innovative marketing world of a product. Irrespective of product rate, many items are safe, secure and cost effective most importantly with similar features whether it is a cell phone or other electronics and so on. For instance, Samsung company has many types of gadget with same operation system in similar to Nokia. Owing to the fact that, Samsung is costly than Nokia many people approach to samsung mobile neither consider price nor functions which is the influenced by the advertisements and tricks of business.
Secondly, approach to a service never assume that money would save the whole result which we need. In case of hospital settings many private hospitals payment for the innovative systems inside often charge to the patients as fees or service charge and which never guarantee that our life is safe there. Since, the same care everyone can afford in the government hospitals with same quality and quantity, irrespective of time and tide.
To conclude, paying extra charge or being money oriented does not guarantee for the outcome. Paying more attention to the value and concentrate in vigilant mind would have better result than considering cost satisfaction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind buying'.
Suggestion: mind buying
...has been spreading rapidly in consumers mind to buy a new product or get a service . Howeve...
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Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nd to buy a new product or get a service . However, in his essay strongly disagree...
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Line 1, column 252, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... brands, and quality and quantity makes the the value of service in surge. Firstly,...
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Line 1, column 252, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... brands, and quality and quantity makes the the value of service in surge. Firstly,...
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Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e most importantly with similar features whether it is a cell phone or other elec...
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Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'hospitals'' or 'hospital's'?
Suggestion: hospitals'; hospital's
... case of hospital settings many private hospitals payment for the innovative systems insi...
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Line 7, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ould have better result than considering cost satisfaction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11507936508 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6802091462 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599206349206 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.087690944 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.181818182 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131827562656 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455884005216 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374026395335 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752825773555 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412745207083 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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