The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The line graph illustrates, the comparison of music choice and pop hub visitors on the web in fifteen days period.
Overall, the most highest visiting site was pop parade, although, some fluctuation in between days. In comparison, music hub surpass pop parade only two days in whole period.
Pop parade was the most significant music site begun at 120,000 visitors on first day. This trend remained steadily on third day after slight reduction on second day. Then there was a dramatic decrease of the visitors by 60,000 on fifth day. While, on seventh day pop parade visitors ratio reached almost near to music hub with just over 20,000. After that there was a rapid growth in pop parade to more than 140,000 on eleventh day before fell to 40,000 on ninth day. The next day trend dipped into 80,000 and remained steadily following day which was lower than music hub but which is surged to more than 160,000 visitors at the end of period.
However, music hub only 40,000 visitors from the beginning day. While, after two days there was a rapid progress of visitors with 60,000 which declined to 20,000 on fourth day. Later, the trend remained constant and continuous fluctuation on next one week period up to eleventh day. The next day visitors of music hub was considerably higher than previous days and reach peak at 120,000 for the following days. As is observed, the number of visitors on music hub was about 70,000 on fifteenth day.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'highest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: highest
...n fifteen days period. Overall, the most highest visiting site was pop parade, although,...
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Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the highest'.
Suggestion: most the highest
...n fifteen days period. Overall, the most highest visiting site was pop parade, although,...
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Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'rapid progress'.
Suggestion: rapid progress
...ng day. While, after two days there was a rapid progress of visitors with 60,000 which declined...
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Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a rapid progress of visitors with 60,000 which declined to 20,000 on fourth day. ...
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Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Later, the trend remained constant and continuous fluctuation on next one week ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, then, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 249.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80722891566 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30900295654 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481927710843 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 343.8 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9277493485 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 5.23603664747 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0669560191245 0.215688989381 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378907433411 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318425084572 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697468760262 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300047622799 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.