Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do.
-How far do you agree? -What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?
-You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Write at least 250 words.
Having well-salary job is utopia for everyone. But, despite working in hard situation, some careers earn less than others that make money easier. This difference causes negative and positive attitudes toward of this issue. I shall examine the merits to both side of the argument.
One argument in favor of considering importance and performance of jobs to earn salary. Actually, social wise, some workers have efficient effect on growing community. For instant, teachers have always undertaken great responsibility of training new generation. Whiles, research findings confirm that in most countries these compassionate ones are deprived of satisfactory salary.
A second argument is that revisiting of lows infrastructure. In order to, adults are responsible for sensitive jobs; governments should motivate people by enforcing strict laws to balance incomes, for instant. Otherwise, people's interest of major careers will be declined in the long run.
Despite these arguments, should not be ignored positive effect of high incomes in society advancement. The widespread investment of high salary occupations in various aspects such as industry, science and education are more likely to bring about new employment possibilities for new generation and unemployment. On the other hand, making new job opportunities can act as a deterrent and reduce national and international emigration rate that people do in search of better career prospective and high standard of living.
Consequently, although, high salary is able to have significant effects on society and individuals, government should boost prestige and salary of basic jobs so as to benefit from educational and standard society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, if, second, so, well, while, as to, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75098814229 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08834542854 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679841897233 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.6412135867 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116914749359 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336595378617 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289574954645 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0576342108019 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281292750795 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.77 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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