Some people feel certain workers like nurses,doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more,especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work they do
Certain jobs like nurses,doctors,lawyers and teachers pay a very significant role in our society and for that they should be payed accordingly.Most of the people think that these jobs are the most highly payed jobs but sadly this is not the truth but instead these jobs are undervalued which seems really unfair.
In my opinion nurses,doctors,lawyers and teachers should have the highest salaries in our society. Teachers are teaching they're students education and they are creating a bright future for the young people in our society while doctors cure patients and the lawyers create rules and bring justice. All this people do the best for the people and future of their country.But these people get payed by the government.And on the other hand actors earn they're money from cinema's and also by selling copies of they're movies.And this brings a lot of money to the actors wallet.But this job does not require any special knowledge and concentration like a doctor's job.Actors are chosen by their qualities and skills.And by these criteria only the best and most talented actors get highly paid,the other actors get paid low and sometimes lower than an office worker.
In conclusion nurses,doctors,lawyers and teachers should be payed more.And these who got highly paid should be most experienced and the most educated people.
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- Some people feel certain workers like nurses,doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more,especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work 56
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'while', 'in conclusion', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.28085106383 0.247107183377 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.157446808511 0.155533422707 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0765957446809 0.0946595960268 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.068085106383 0.0501214627716 136% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0340425531915 0.0437548338989 78% => OK
Prepositions: 0.106382978723 0.122226691241 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0468085106383 0.0403226058552 116% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.19472288105 2.80594681477 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00425531914894 0.0326793684256 13% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.123404255319 0.0861772015684 143% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0170212765957 0.021408717616 80% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00851063829787 0.011925033212 71% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1333.0 1933.35771543 69% => OK
No of words: 216.0 316.048096192 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.1712962963 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20517956788 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.365740740741 0.374742101984 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.236111111111 0.28420135186 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.162037037037 0.203846283523 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.087962962963 0.137316102897 64% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19472288105 2.80594681477 114% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.037074148 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546296296296 0.56093040696 97% => OK
Word variations: 50.4300369314 60.7387585426 83% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0891783567 31% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 43.2 20.7743622355 208% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 162.683250521 49.517814964 329% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 266.6 127.492653851 209% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.2 20.7743622355 208% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.0 0.814263465372 246% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38877755511 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 3.99599198397 450% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 66.8111111111 49.1944974215 136% => OK
Elegance: 1.67213114754 1.69124875643 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443901451345 0.332605444948 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.223916977671 0.102741220458 218% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0194376930751 0.0668466124924 29% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.789668725625 0.534860350844 148% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.228061057315 0.148594505496 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.259320657938 0.134430193775 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073907192788 0.0742795772207 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.393442572668 0.324371583561 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0155643881933 0.0638462369009 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.318325332834 0.228012699653 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596752947162 0.058150111329 103% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.68436873747 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.90881763527 34% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 10.4468937876 48% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.