Some people feel that children’s free time must include educational activities, others feel that studies should not be part of free time, to what extent do you agree or disagree
In this fast-moving world, education becomes a part of everyone’s life. Many people hold the opinion that kids should spend their unoccupied time doing educational tasks, others however disagree that learning should not be a portion of their unoccupied hours. This essay will completely agree that students should spend their free time on educational activities.
On the one hand, students can spend their time in any activities in which they are interested to do. Even though education is a part of the student’s life they have the right to spend their unoccupied time in any activities such as sports, arts, music, etc. To cite an example, Sachin Tendulkar is one of the best cricketers in this world but he failed to succeed in his academics. However, he achieved a great place without the help of education because during his childhood days he usually spends his free time playing cricket which helped him a lot in the future. So, parents should allow their children to take part in any tasks whichever they like without compelling them to do educational tasks which are completely preposterous.
On the other hand, in this world, each person is recognized by their educational background. Students should spend their free time on educational tasks such as the abacus, which will succor them in the future. For instance, after learning abacus students can easily solve the challenging problems in mathematics, and also it will help them to get good marks in their academics. Therefore, students should use their unoccupied time with educational activities which are entirely necessary for their future.
To draw a conclusion, this essay completely agreed that students should utilize their unoccupied hours mainly for educational activities which helps them for their future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33797909408 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72609731136 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505226480836 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8009197209 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.846153846 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227876426141 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104127581347 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651439509561 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162668096207 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721791399636 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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