It is considered by some residents that the level of cruelty had better be adjusted by the regime in big screens on television and at the cinema, while there are others who think that sadism ought not to be standardized because of the film's effectiveness. Personally, I believe that the normalization of violence films is unnecessary. In this essay, I will deep devide into both sides of the argument and state my posture about it.
Looking at the first site of the statement, it is undeniable that violent movies latent many drawbacks. First, this kind of film might affect human behavior detrimentally including in terms of teenagers and adults. If teenagers follow this type of movie frequently many hours per day, their character is likely to become negative through their action. By way of illustration, students who delight in watching violent films tend to mimic the character's actions and do them with their friends, leading to school violence. Secondly, there is a concern that violent films may glorify physical force, presenting it as a heroic and glamorous action.Therefore, this can potentially send a wrong message about the real-life consequences of violence.
On the other hand, sadistic films also bring many profits and conduct the development of the economy. For instance, the Marvel movie series has made a tremendous amount of fortune to enterprises, which used to be on the brink of bankruptcy. Moreover, many audiences are drawn to action packed-films that include elements of violence for their entertainment value. High-stakes conflicts and intense action sequences can contribute to the overall excitement of a movie.
In conclusion, the release of films containing savagery both have benefits and drawbacks. Nevertheless, I still believe that they can not be regulated. But instead, the government should implement and enforce strict age restrictions for violent films.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33887043189 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03811470285 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63122923588 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.087724118 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.133333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232086156578 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703119865601 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540110546875 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142684564612 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570974702284 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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