some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford
Nowadays, many people becoming among the debts becouse they bought expensive things and which things don't need them, as a result, they fall into debt and this essay discusses the causes and the possible solution to solve it.
For a number of reasons, many people are facing debt problems nowadays due to the lifestyles. Firtly, with the existence of social media such as Facebook, Instagram and other, there a lot of people are showing off their luxurious goods and expensive things then take some photos and upload them into the applications and more people will see it and want to buy it and they spend a lot money for unnecessary things. As a consequence many people face a serious debt problem.
There several things which can be solve this issue. If the government will set any limits to buying anything for each and everyone, then this path creates equality among everyone and no one will think about the position.
The another solution is the government should provide to give credit for people's through bank for several years then the bank should tell people that they will only be allowed to apply for a loan that they can repay.
In conclusion, to avoid getting into debt everyone should consider both advantages and disadvantages of the products before buying it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ought expensive things and which things dont need them, as a result, they fall into ...
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Line 2, column 415, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...end a lot money for unnecessary things. As a consequence many people face a seriou...
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Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o buying anything for each and everyone, then this path creates equality among ev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86697247706 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38181199187 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587155963303 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.9885049877 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.625 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353790583246 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143234317766 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715185720053 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180126081353 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737926939663 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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