Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford.What are the reasons for this behaviour?What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

Essay topics:

Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford.

What are the reasons for this behaviour?

What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

Attractive advertisement make people to buy unwanted things and unneccessary products. Most of the individuals get traped into detps, this is totally depend on person to person and it is countless, the covert, exessive desire to own flamboyant things are cosidered primary causes. Despite, to overcome this every one should work on to grab their goals.

Some citizens may put themself into the loans due to reasonable reasons. On the other hand, some want to take advantage on their cards, it may seem intelligent action, still they are in a fallacy state. Most of us hidding our real and wants facade and loving to have magnificent thing which was ruled by the neighbours and friends. For intance, the trustable journalrevealed that over expectation and facade to themself is a trap to use cards rather than cash.

If we reduce carelessness and lethargic behaviour, we can dramatically pare down the usage of debt. For example, a lot of citizens use their credit or debt cards for simple and daily purchases and this activity enthrall the homo sapiens into it, if a person throws percet for using card which is considered as one of the preventable methods. In contrast, without any principle while using the card will not excise this problem, nontheless, there is few living beigns are managing it quite perfectly by their hard work and proper vision how to accumplish things.

By and large, exaggerated desire, usrup are the base which frame their own traps for them, yet still by curtailing, awareness, and must work our butt to achive the objects which makes agnostic to people.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
... get traped into detps, this is totally depend on person to person and it is countless...
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Line 5, column 411, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aled that over expectation and facade to themself is a trap to use cards rather t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, while, for example, in contrast, by and large, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00751879699 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68876637867 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646616541353 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3922331527 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.090909091 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203772541445 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683095303793 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339113807235 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101869568681 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539808212129 0.056905535591 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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