Some people marriage just for money. Others do the same thing for love. What do you think about the disadvantages and advantages of this trend.
Marriage is usually a major matter for everyone since it changes your life, your future, and even yourself dramatically. However, not every couple marries for the same reason. Nowadays, we can plainly observe that two frequent elements entice individuals into relationships: love and money. Some argue that you should always marry for love, while others argue that it is better to marry for money. However, I feel that marriage should be based on both love and money.
Money is now important in practically every aspect of life. Everyone requires money in order to settle down, have a good career, raise children, and so on. When deciding to establish a relationship with someone, we sometimes investigate his family history because we are terrified of suffering and poverty. Hardship may make our lives more difficult to live, causing disagreements and affecting our relationships. As a consequence, before entering into a relationship, money is an important factor to consider.
But if money is the foundation of the marriage, divorce is a foregone conclusion. On the other hand, if love is the foundation of the marriage, then the answer to issues would not be threats and money, but rather understanding the other and growing together to overcome challenges. Getting married means spending the majority of your time with your partner, caring for him, assisting each other in dealing with problems, and sharing all of your joys and sorrows together. Furthermore, there can be no really pleasure in a marriage if there is no love; there can only be lameness, sadness, and even hatred. This may result in struggle, misery, divorces, and, worst of all, injuries. Love cannot be bought. But money can always be earned.As a result, I believe that both contribute significantly to the formation of a happy family.
In marriage, no matter how important money can be in our lives, love is always the best .Therefore, love and money should stand together. As a result, I believe that both contribute significantly to the formation of a happy family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, then, therefore, while, i feel, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09226190476 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87597803289 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553571428571 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9556880487 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0526315789 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6842105263 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202547062386 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624200175192 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566303949729 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123850713435 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827566302398 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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