The education you receive from your family is more important than the education you receive from schools To what extent do you agree with this statement and why
Nowadays, education has become very necessary in everyone's life. Due to this both education from home and from school are completely important and necessary so that create a good person. However, some people believe that the information from family is more important compared to that of from schools. To some extent I agree with this point of view and this essay will discuss why education from family is moderately more important than from an educational system.
Nowadays educational institutions are increasingly present in the life of toddlers and teenagers. For example, the educational department frequently teaches and promotes positive habits among children, such as the usage of language such as "thank you," "please," "good morning," and so on, but tasks are the responsibility of parents. Furthermore, the more positive role models children have in their homes, the better the adult's chances of becoming a good member of society.
In the present days, dads and mothers are even more overwhelmed with all of the requirements of the family, and they frequently try to delegate care and duty for their children to an educational institution, which is a tremendous error. In other words, the children learns, copies, and transmits activities learned in a familial setting. Children have a habit of imitating the adults with whom they interact on a daily basis. It influenced their movements, behaviors, ideas, and speech. A well-behaved youngster is raised by good parents, but a mischievous child is raised in an unhealthy family. For example, if their father is unpleasant to others, the children will accept it as normal and repeat the behavior.
In conclusion, the family as the school are extremely decisive for the growth of kids, the family being much more significant for creating good examples and personalities. Because of this, I agree with the teachings from family is more influential than the learnings from school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37419354839 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07702709342 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1248608016 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.066666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330841818583 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10557505401 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122007679469 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195559132934 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14141077339 0.056905535591 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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