Some people like to own the place they live, but other people like to rent where they live. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Individuals have different opinions against living in their own houses or being tenants and living in other houses. Although these two approaches have their benefits, I prefer to live in my house.
On the one hand, renting houses as temporary places for living has taken attentions of many people. There are several reasons behind this tendency. People might want to rent houses as a yearly basis to have many choices for living according to their needs. For instance families that have children need to have access to some facilities such as schools and amusement parks. Secondly by having this opportunity to live in different places, people can find others with similar interests and they can make relationship with them. Finally be living in different houses, people can have access to new technology in houses, for example new air-conditioning and the state-of-the-art technologies.
On the other hand, there are many families how tend to live in their own houses. By living in you houses, without considering exceptional situations like immigrating to other areas, you do not need to move from your houses annually. As a result, the members of families become accustomed to their houses and their neighbors, and they can have long-lasting relationships with them. Additionally, mailing address would be constant and people can easily reach their posted documents. In addition, by living in your properties, you would not need any special permission in order to change the design of houses. These reasons and comfortable feeling that can be achieved by living in my house, make me to agree with the view of living in own house.
In conclusion, although there are two main views about living in a house that belongs to you or be a tenant and existing of different reasons that make us to select one of them, I think I would prefer to live in my house that belongs to myself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 528, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9873015873 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76335302295 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492063492063 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3342857041 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.733333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284015306342 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100837363606 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593977105037 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173375546509 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563120803824 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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