Some people prefer to communicate with their online friends than to socialize with people in their local communities Do you think it has more advantages than disadvantages

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Some people prefer to communicate with their online friends than to socialize with people in their local communities • Do you think it has more advantages than disadvantages•

In modern era; technology is developing day by day • In many countries mostly individual give preference to make many friends with the help of internet as well as they don not like to communicate with people in their local communities• It is my belief that demerits of this phenomenon overshadow of its merits which I would explain in upcoming paragraph•

To commence with; the first and foremost demerits of this is individual can face difficulty if they make their friends with the help of internet • because individual can not know about the another person• They can share the feelings • Along with sometime individual share their personal life• In present time technology is rapidly increased • To give specific example; there are many scam account are available• on internet• some individual can get a more profit where individual make a friends and to get a lot of information by other people • so they can hack their bank account • They can took money•

Another disadvantage is that of making friends on internet • In my nations mostly individuals post the images on their account such as Instagram ; Facebook • some hacker can hack the account and they can misuse the image• sometime they get a earn money by other folk• because individual have fear and they complete the demand to hocker•

On the other hand ; there are some advantages of this statement • firstly; people get more benefits because it is better way to collect a lot of information about culture and traditional• Also it is convenient method to exchange their ideas and by social media they can learn communication skill• For instance when people make in friends which they stay in foreign country• To Hance the knowledge • such as how to clebrate their festival in foreign country and they can learn the other language•

To sum up from above all mentioned discussion it can be concluded that there are many benefits when people make a new friends on internet• but there are some demerits of this phenomenon because individual have to face difficulty in thier life

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, well, for instance, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98005698006 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75840975976 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467236467236 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 351.0 20.2975951904 1729% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1748.0 106.682146367 1639% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 351.0 20.7667163134 1690% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 104.0 7.06120827912 1473% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225268090044 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.225268090044 0.084324248473 267% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138617043996 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588250571012 0.056905535591 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 177.5 13.0946893788 1356% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -276.33 50.2224549098 -550% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 139.0 11.3001002004 1230% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.08 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.24 8.58950901804 282% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 61.0 9.78957915832 623% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 142.4 10.1190380762 1407% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 61.0 10.7795591182 566% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In modern era; technology is developing day by day • In...
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Line 1, column 356, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...h I would explain in upcoming paragraph• To commence with; the first and foremost...
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...To commence with; the first and foremost demerits of this is individual can face ...
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... demerits of this is individual can face difficulty if they make their friends wi...
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... can hack their bank account • They can took money• Another disadvantage is that...
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...heir bank account • They can took money• Another disadvantage is that of making f...
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...ernet • In my nations mostly individuals post the images on their account such as...
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...they can misuse the image• sometime they get a earn money by other folk• because ...
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...an misuse the image• sometime they get a earn money by other folk• because indiv...
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...an misuse the image• sometime they get a earn money by other folk• because individual...
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...formation about culture and traditional• Also it is convenient method to exchange...
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...oreign country• To Hance the knowledge • such as how to clebrate their festival...
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...To Hance the knowledge • such as how to clebrate their festival in foreign coun...
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...he knowledge • such as how to clebrate their festival in foreign country and th...
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...y and they can learn the other language• To sum up from above all mentioned discu...
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Line 9, column 119, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'friend'?
Suggestion: friend
...re many benefits when people make a new friends on internet• but there are some demerit...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, well, for instance, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98005698006 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75840975976 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467236467236 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 351.0 20.2975951904 1729% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1748.0 106.682146367 1639% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 351.0 20.7667163134 1690% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 104.0 7.06120827912 1473% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225268090044 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.225268090044 0.084324248473 267% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138617043996 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588250571012 0.056905535591 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 177.5 13.0946893788 1356% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -276.33 50.2224549098 -550% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 139.0 11.3001002004 1230% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.08 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.24 8.58950901804 282% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 61.0 9.78957915832 623% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 142.4 10.1190380762 1407% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 61.0 10.7795591182 566% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.