Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that are more advance to living in an apartment.Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?Give reasons for your answer and include any examples.
There is no debate regarding the importance of fixed accommodations for raising a family. Although there are few options of a living, these are either a house or an apartment, many people are concerned about weighing the pros against the cons of these types. Personally speaking, I find the advantages of getting an apartment are more superior than its disadvantages in contrast to living in a house.
The single most significant drawback of houses is the huge prices that many couples couldn't afford to pay. It is true, however, that a house has several attractions but they are minor benefits. You could have a garden that you can design preferentially or be able to adjust the rooms or the spaces according to your family needs are examples of such benefits. Adding more, many couples prefer to have a spacious place of living so they are fond of detached or semi-detached houses. However, they need to spend huge funds for maintaining such dream-house or even to get an under dreams house in the country-side unless they want to have a large debt for the rest of their life. To illustrate this, I mention the recent numbers of money amount that new couples need to give for a simple ordinary house in my country; it costs them at least 100.000 us dollars. Hence, it is non-applicable to have a house with some benefits and spending such huge payments.
On the other hand, living in a compound offers many essential properties with little expenses that make its disadvantages are unseenable. Firstly, it permit the family to live in a more secured atmosphere. In addition to the observational security cameras and alarm sensors for fires, these blocks of building often have a single guarded gates that control foreign people traffic to the apartment complexes. Moreover, children playing with their peers in the shared garden are more protected as been observed by the security guards who are working around. Secondly, keeping an apartment is simpler than for a big house. Cleaning, for instance, is more facilitated as there are starecase or a garden and roof surfaces to be tided up and this is a concern for many wives. Finally, apartments are usually available with competitive prices as they are widely available and comparatively cheap to be constructed. Thus, couples could have one with reasonable price and many of the fore mentioned criteria and more.
In conclusion, although houses offer more adjustable spaces, apartments appear to have more advantages. I think that its great features of security and easy house keeping with affordable prices for a living building are outweigh its disadvantages and are not available is houses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, at least, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2219.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 442.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02036199095 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82116082925 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536199095023 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 714.6 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4661587008 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.95 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335612664151 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991075527575 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761811411072 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219758964698 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520682151867 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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