some people prefer to live with laws. others prefer to live randomly without laws. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Living without laws is impossible for many people, in the same time we have myriad people who wish they could live randomly without living up to any laws, which is why the number of atheist become increasing at a fast pace. The conflicts and arguments between both teams will be touched on as follows:
The audience who pursue to preserve the Constitution has many arguments and irrefutable evidences. For instance, they assume that if we call the lows off, the persecution, murder, torture and crime will spread unrelentingly through communities. Furthermore, the robbers will get away with any things they want , and no one can eliminate them. Moreover, the adolescents will be easily able to hang around, hence, break the decorum among their societies down without any censuring.
Consequently, sadness, fright, corruption, and resentments will surely reign, people will not just have to look after their children, but even after themselves. Also, famine, inflation, poverty and contamination will threaten the life, as a result of running out of food , water and commodities. People will not manage to enjoy their fundamental rights such as freedom and safety.
On the other hand, people who calls for the end of laws resort to some expedients to persuade the people into giving in to their demands of absolute liberty. In fact, they just want to have and do what they want regardless of other people’s feelings and perspectives. A very good example is that they discredit the principles and the laws through women’s right and violence into constitution and religion’s laws. Strangely, quite a few people gave in their demands without any sufficient evidence, it just a bind imitation.
Last but not least, from my perspective, the governments should cut off those agnostic and atheist people into a far way-deserted island , show them up in a public square and warn the people that these people are a serious danger in our society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, so, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16352201258 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87458094567 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619496855346 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5665515246 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.307692308 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178919972648 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553067765569 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631551315591 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959113822765 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817347562252 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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