It is sometimes said that borrowing money from friends can harm or damage the relationship. Do you agree? Why or why not.
Recently relationship between friends has confronted a lot of problems. There are those who say borrowing money from friends harm the relationship, while others believe the opposite. In this essay I will examine both sides and add my overall view.
People who say that borrowing money causes negative results have their own perspectives and reasons. They think borrowing money as exploitation for friendship. As well as the main reason that they think that most friends need friendship for personal purposes. For example, if someone asked his friend borrowing money and he doesn't know if he has money or no, so In this case maybe happen embarrassing attitude that can make the relationship weaker than before.
Despite of all these arguments this is matter depends on the friends themselves, if they have a good thinking toward their friends. In addition a lot relationship stand at the cooperation between friends and they deal with each other easily without any problems. For instance, some people believe broadly that asking friends for any favor help the relationship to be stronger and better. Consequently they regard each other brothers.
In conclusion, from my overall opinion I disagree with this matter from numerous reason beside it depend on the personality of friends. I think people who say that borrowing money harmful have negative view with all due respect. On my opinion I think borrowing money is a matter of giving and taking.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16949152542 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72051058121 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572033898305 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2152615023 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1428571429 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206641939598 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794634683478 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061334707364 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139699280587 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455306884875 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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