Some people prefer to relax by doing physical activities, while others choose mental activities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, there is a wide array of recreational alternatives for human being which can be divided into two different categories: physical and mental activities. A number of people express their preference over the former option, while others choose participating in the latter one during relaxation time. However, either former or latter is efficacious in alleviating stress, from my own perspective, I prefer taking part in doing workout as they are beneficial to health as well.
On the one hand, advocates of mental activities argue that such games as chess or Sudoku constitute effectual methods to revitalize the brain and therefore the mood. Apparently, since cognitive-related activities expose the brain to extreme challenging, individuals will need to hit the refresh button and reorganize their thoughts. Whereby, their mind is liberated from tangible thinking pattern after a day occupied with avalanche of tasks. For example, in Poland, people usually play chess or board games to blow off some steam. However, many are concerned about the health impact of this as it dissuades people from moving and exercising.
On the other hand, those who are in favor of physical movement corroborate their notion with scientifically validated fact pertaining to the link between exercising and tension reduction. Decades of research has indicated that cortisol or stress hormone, as its name suggests, is one of the main driving forces of tension. Interestingly, by taking up moderate exercise frequently, the amount of cortisol has significantly decreased. Nonetheless, doing sports is irrefutably exceedingly energy-consuming, hence it is inappropriate relaxation for blue collars whose jobs already encompasses labor-exhausted tasks.
In conclusion, notwithstanding acknowledged advantages of mental activities, I believe physical counterpart is superior choice given the bonus benefit for overall well-being.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to participate'.
Suggestion: to participate
... the former option, while others choose participating in the latter one during relaxation tim...
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Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...allenging, individuals will need to hit the refresh button and reorganize their thoughts. W...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, hence, however, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79505300353 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29722311282 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685512367491 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4251246861 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.153846154 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198137703802 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548312576769 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488011829262 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979516877768 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459333583 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.36 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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